MonsieurRosseau

The best way to get a good name is to search a list of appropriate names for the time/place/ethnicity of the character for something that sounds right. It helps to ...

Good job! Except one part were the Zombie Watch Committee guy answers the phone saying "Brains?" Wouldn't one be a bit suspicious? Strange way to awnser the phone i think ...

Thank you, Pippiedooda and Crazy Sock Lover (117) for your reviews. I feel informed. Just one question, though. The person looming in the pale hallway light was slightly odd. It ...

I say, good show, old chap!

He should have the ability to produce flowers out of midair, simply because it makes wooing people so much easier. Being able to turn ones body into water or stone ...

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Ah, two things popped out at me when I was reading it. In the last stanza, "worth" and "words" don't quite make a partial rhyme. It sounds off a bit. ...

It's useful in statistics and in quantum mechanics. What school do you go to that studies quantum physics in ninth grade?

This is an utter guess, but I'm thinking that anything that uses liquid water in below freezing temperatures would have trouble due to the freezing of the water.

Firstly, I like the idea. It's very, well, vivid. The pyromaniac within me swoons. That said, I wish to ask a question. Hmm... The last stanza is a lot different ...

Nice concept, by the by, but indeed the flow is slightly off. As you mentioned, the stanzas are rather inconsistent. Might I make a suggestion of how to make it ...

Ah, most delicious. It's always nice to read a vignette like this. It's short, non-sequitur, and pleasant to read. I'd say it's the literary equivalent of a well-crafted icon. In ...

Thanks to everyone for the welcome. I feel as though my human need to be part of something is partially fulfilled. Hey there, I'm Zakku Alpha. :) Welcome to YWS. ...

Yes, well, here I am. I am currently feeling too lazy to write more.