MonoTheElderish

well, since i have no idea what I'm doing, Might as well do this. P1010013.JPG

Very interesting. I do agree with the other reviewers about the spacing of a particular word. Variety is the spice of life and all that. Basically the advice already given ...

Really liked it! The details were really cool, like the excel nod or the "admin" username. one thing I need to point out is this, “The south! The south!” called ...

Thank you so much! Yeah, I've had issues with formatting in the past. But I think I got sorted out now. Let me know what you think.

Ok, Fixed it. Clarified a bit. Added sparkles. Thanks for reading it!

Thank you for the review! And I see what you mean. Hopefully i'll be able to improve on that a bit.

There's About 4 1/2 chapters all told. And I figure I'm about 1/4 of the way through the book.

I love this. the imagery is great. Although, It does seem like he's alone though, which is weird, since it violates rule 1 of combat. but other than that I ...

Western Confederation Infantry Corps" during the 2104 - 2579 period of civil, environmental, and military strife. Presented to you in its entirety, unabridged From the Stockholm archives. ( Hash Code:

Very Interesting. It drew me in even though this type of book isn't normally my forte. This bit, ("I could hear contempt in his voice. He turned around, opened the ...

I really like this! It's very.... "Steampunk" It was really a great read. I can't attest to grammatical errors, but the guy talking to Ulrich while putting him to sleep ...

Hello! I joined recently and figured I'd pop in here and tell a bit about myself. I'm a sci-fi writer of sorts, but i'll give anything a shot if I ...

Hello, This is for a "write a story out of your favorite song" contest. The song is "Camilo" by State Radio Critiques would be welcome! Lyrics Woke him up with ...