MonoTheElderish

If it doesn't make any sense I Really recommend reading the first chapters

(HC: #23-423-8642-4///STKHLM About 5 hours later it had gone quiet again. Not completely quiet though, you still had the occasional shot over the barricade at some barely seen shadow. And ...

Chapter 4 About 5 hours later it had gone quiet again. Not completely quiet though, you still had the occasional shot over the barricade at some barely seen shadow. And ...

Wow. O.o You draw SO well. The detail in your drawings is incredible! The coloration (is that the right word?) of Finn is really cool! The tattoo looks awesome as ...

Wow. I wish I could draw half as well! I really like the Island one. Seems very Dr. Suessish to me for some reason. The leaf one could use some ...

I actually really liked this even though its not quite what I normally read. Very attention grabbing. At least to me. Very descriptive while It also doesn't over complicate. Anyway, ...

Thank you! If you haven't already, There's two other chapters that I highly recommend reading first! Thanks for the review!

(HC: #23-423-8642-3///STKHLM As We crossed the last 300 yards of the DMZ it stayed quiet, No small arms, No Arty, No Air. Nothing. After Living through the last 6 klicks ...

Thank You! Will do! Editing is on the way! Thanks again for the review! Edit, The spelling of "Wizzard" is intentional. It's so the callsign is more recognizable over the ...

Yay! I guess this is what happens when I start writing a book in the middle of the night. :/ Thanks for the review! I'll go through and edit this ...

Thanks! I'll work on a glossary one of these days then. It actually sounds kinda fun.

Ok, First off, this scares me. O.o Which is a good thing. Second, awesome. Just. Plain. Awesome. Drowning scares the crap out of me. I love to swim, hate to ...

Wonderful. Even though I got in on the harry potter thing a little late, this still resonates. So sad that Dumbledore died. *sniff* and Fred and Bellatrix. So sad. A ...

Yeah, I tried to fix the capitals but I guess I missed quite a bit. Would a glossary make it easier for casual readers? As far as the weaponry goes, ...

(HC: #23-423-8642-3///STKHLM As We crossed the last 300 yards of the DMZ it stayed quiet, No small arms, No Arty, No Air. Nothing. After Living through the last 6 klicks ...