Monki

Okay! All spaced out and ready for a proper critique from Razor Blade and anyone else who fancies critiquing these horrible few chapters of one of my current work-in-progresses.

Thanks. I will right now guys.

It's her NEICE for God's sake people! Get it right! Not her sister, not her cousin, her NEICE. Very nice work. :)

I absolutely love this one. Do you mind if I use this for my desktop/wallpaper sometime? I'll add your name to the bottom if you like also. :)

Mind if I use the 'Fleur' one as my desktop? I'll even add your name at the bottom with photoshop if you like. :) It inspires me. I guess you ...

Cool!

Cool! There's a character that (almost) has the same name as me! Sweet! Lol. :smt050 I am so lovable (and blushable)! -blushes- Anyways, I'll work on editing/critiquing as many of ...

Alright. Thanks. So.... any works that you need editing/constructive criticisms?

Wow! Thanks! Lol. Personally, I rate it a 5/10. And it's my own story. But, thanks again. :)

Thanks! Lol. You make me very comfortable here. Anyway, I invited my ex-boyfriend (we're still good friends) to join this site. That's alright to do, right? :)

Taken down because it was an epic failure. xD I wrote it like... over a year ago!

Personally, I prefer writing in my writing journal and then I type it up and add it to my writing folder/protfolio on my Macintosh. :) So... if anyone could, would ...

We sat outside, just talking. We were sitting in that old field that we used to meet at as teenagers. When we were younger, the field was covered in a ...

Chapter 1: It's like they don't understand what I'm saying, how I think. They don't understand why I do the things I do; Like why I experiment with my foods, ...

Thank you so much SeraphTree. And thank you too Gwenivire. And thanks for not being harsh with me. This is my first time ever posting my work online. I just ...