Monki

Well, all I can say is that personally, I dwell on description. I know, really bad. I bet all of you are gasping right now. I know, I know. Bad ...

I have a new favorite writing tip. Unfortunately, this ones only for the girls. Sorry, boys! Okay, so the tip for girls (with long hair--long enough to put in a ...

Thanks Gladius, Billy, and Sleeping Valor! I will work on it. ;) I noticed that I seem to switch tenses a lot, too. But, I just left it as-is and ...

If I could use only one word to describe this, it would be... interesting. It IS different than anything you've ever wrote, but different is good-at least most of the ...

Awesome Seraph! I love it! (Told you I'd critique some of your stuff--eventually...) I love everything about it. And, as hard as this is for me to believe, I understand ...

More crap. lol. Another one that I took down because it sucked so bad.

Nope. I keep bugging her about it though and she said because I keep bugging her she'll give them to us today.

Hey now! Don't get me wrong. I think it's a good idea. And I'm not saying that I don't like it. In fact, I think it's a great idea. But, ...

Snoink > Will do, Snoink! ;)

Kitty > Oh! I like a little of both! I favor description, but I almost like dialogue just as much. I will keep you all updated on my progress. (AND, ...

I agree with Chocoholic 100%. I think that if you make people pay to post their work, eventually, hardly anyone will post their work, and it will defeat the whole ...

Aww!!! I'm so sorry! That's so cute! I love doggies! Now you're gonna make me get all weepy! R.I.P. Puppy! Do you have any digital photos of her?

Hayden!!! I didn't think you'd post it, but you did! I thought maybe you were--dare I say it?--lying... Whoops. Misjudgement there. Anywho's, I'd just say to elaborate. Make it longer ...

Yes, yes!--You're welcome! Lol. Do whatever you wish with it. I'll PM you as soon as I've scanned it in. ;)

I suggest to you an agent. No, I have never been published and haven't ever attempted to get an agent, but that's because I'm not exactly done with my novel ...