Monki

Wonderful! 10/10 At first I didn't get it, but that because I'm slow. Now I get it!

Brownish hair, eyes that stand out, thin, athletic, beautiful smile, loved by many. :) Am I right? Lmao. Hope so.

Thanks for the help everyone! Snoink is helping me. She's creating my website template. ^ ^ Monki

Hey, Azila! I just read your critique again. I guess I kind of forgot to reply to yours. No, that's actually not harsh at all compared to other critiques I've ...

Thanks, Adam. ^ ^ Snoink > YAY! *thumbs up!* Lmao. It's perfect!

Thank you, JellyBee! I appreciate your post. If you would ever like me to read any of your text, please feel free to PM me. :)

Okay, I just registered for the site you just showed me. :) It does look promising. So, now what do we begin with?

Thanks for the help everyone. Snoink > I could use Freewebs or anything really. Freewebs is the only one I've ever tried to use though. I really don't know the ...

Oh, really? That sucks. :( I know nothing about making a website. *sigh* Do you know of any (free) websites that allow you to use your own?

I'm not sure if this is the right place to put this... but, I really need a customized website layout. If you can create one for me, I'd be forever ...

I'm suddenly feeling rather inadequate. Lmao. You're feeling inadequate? *pokes number of reviews*

Lmao. Thank you both for the review. Truthfully, after reading your review Icaruss, I realized my stupidity... I just kind of wrote what I felt. I didn't mean to really ...

Prologue: Jealousy. It rages inside of me. I feel that if people look me in the eyes, they can see a fire burning. I take out my iPod and turn ...

Lmao. Um... not really a big fan... That "o-o-o-o's", etc... are kind of... unnecessary. It would be much better and taken more seriously if you just wrote the word regularly. ...

All I can say is great plot. I'm really impressed by how you did this POV thing. I don't see many guys writing from a girls POV. Very, very well ...