Monki

You think you know me. You want to lend me a hand. But I refuse--I don't need help. And please, don't try to understand. You think you know me. Well, ...

Kay, here's the dealio: my suggestions/comments/critiques shall be in bold. Your work will in the quotes of course, but the parts that I'm going to comment on will be in ...

First off, my critiques/suggestions will be in bold. Your work will be in italics. Here we go: Nothing ever smells of roses that rises out of mud… I don't quite ...

I'd be glad to review! :) My comments/critiques will be in bold, your writing in italics. And here we go: As my favorite song danced out of the stereo, I ...

That's really awesome that you had the idea to write an Ode to Writers! I would've never thought of that. I mean, come on, it's an Ode to Writers! And ...

I must say that I agree with pegasi_quill. I'm not quite sure why you made this a poem... I think this is a good outline for a story of fiction; ...

All I can say is that I found nothing to critique. Really, I didn't. This was beautiful. I couldn't have done it better (or even this good) myself. Tell me, ...

Surprisingly, I'm the only person that agrees with Suzanne. ^ ^ I read this once, twice, three times over and I was like, "Hm... this doesn't sound like a poem, ...

((OOC: This is my first ever attempt at romantic fiction, so feel free to give pointers :D )) Ooh! Congrats on your first attempt at romantic fiction!!! That's basically the ...

The way he laughed. The way he kissed me good-bye. The way he said, "Everything's gonna be all right, babe." It all began to fade away. That day that he ...

The first thing I will say is, "Oh my gosh! This is the beginning of a really good book." This is the type of stuff that I like to read. ...

The first thing I will say is, "Oh my gosh! This is the beginning of a really good book." This is the type of stuff that I like to read. ...

The first thing I will say is, "Oh my gosh! This is the beginning of a really good book." This is the type of stuff that I like to read. ...

:( Monki ish sad and confused. I don't know if I should change mine or leave it alone... On the down side, it would really confuse people. And, Monki has ...

This_is_history > Oh my gosh! You got all of it right except the eyes. I have a little longer than shoulder length brownish-blondish hair, big icy blue eyes (so I'm ...