Monki

Heya! Okay, here's how I'm going to critique this. Your writing will be in italics and mine will be in bold. :) Kay? Kay. And, here we go: “Almost ready ...

8/10. Nice. ^ ^

Eh, 7/10. ^ ^

1) Starting time: 3:52 PM 2) Full Name: Melissa Nicole Yawn 3) Nickname: Monki, Gremlin, Gremlinita, Missa, Missy, or Mel-Mel 4) School: Lehigh Senior High School 5) Email: 6) Eyes: ...

It is definitely not probable that she got kicked off for not posting a long enough review. Look at this: That *points up* is definitely shorter than a paragraph. That ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! My name's Monki! I'm sorry to hear about your cousin. But, I'm sure she didn't get kicked off just for defending herself. The mods are usually ...

soconfused4512 - Please don't use all caps. Consider toning it down a bit for those with sensitive eye sight and what not. All caps is not so easy on the ...

As Yatta! said, you asked for a critique, so you're going to get one (actually, quite a few)! :) That was meant in the nicest way possible, by the way. ...

Hey Alice! My name's Monki, Mel-Mel, Melissa, Missy, Missa, Gremlin, Gremlinita. What ever you want to call me. :) (My real name's Melissa.) ^ ^ I'm so happy that you ...

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Woah! That's really cool! I'm no artiste. So... I kind of gave up on drawing maps.

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