Monakeya

As I opened my eyes I noticed the plane landing, next to me was my dad “Wake up sleepy head” he said grinning “We’re here” “How long was I sleeping” ...

I kknow i mispelled some stuff and the story is conusing i'll continue it.

I’ve been a loser, geek and nerd ever since I could remember I think I’ve never had any friends in my life, hmmm... nope never. Since my mom is so ...

I liked it , it was very intersting in the beginning I didn't really understand I thought the man's name was the man and red was the creature who told ...

I loved it in the beginning you spelled best friends wrong but whatever this should totally be a book gold star for you very good it was a good story ...

At first i thought it really didn't make sense but then it started getting interesting u should make it much much longer it was good you had good grammar you ...

I'm always left alone No one cares about me Selfish! All they do is care about themselves And not me It's not fair that everyone has nice parents who care ...

good job actually this could be a really goood song i would listen to it on the radio on the time and i really love the ending: I'll never be ...

I like everything in this poem it brings such a powerful message about always being there for your friens which is really sweet ummm.. also this poem shudd b pg13 ...

[quote="dancingclouds"]The Dance Your simple, white dress Floats in and out As you twirl with your dance partner Your delicate face, shifts slightly to form a small smile Sending a tiny ...

it is a nice poem a lot of imagery and feeling good work but u shudd say the lad i mean if it's about u it shudd b in another ...

Aww that is absolutely Beautiful great detail imagery metaphor everything it's amazing and plus i actually understand it ..................................................................... very good

"Insecurity" She feels so insecure putting pictures of models on her wall to motivate her After she eats she sticks her finger down her mouth out comes a big wave ...

"It’s not the easiest thing in the world You’ve been betrayed in a way A way that makes you feel like you have no emotions" that part in the beginning ...

that's exactly the way i feel no one understands me this poem speaks fo real fo real this time good job 5 gold stars for u keep on writing grl ...