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Mochi

  • Art & Photography Re: Graphics Garage :P

    HAYLEY WILLIAMS! *ahem* Sorry for the caps. I. Love. Her. Awesome graphic!

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: What's in a name...

    Hello! Horror, sci-fi and fantasy, I love those too. And superheroes! Aha, I like you already. xD

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Here and Now is better than There and Then

    *waves* Hello! I'm Mochi, thirteen, living in Canada. I finish only my short stories. ^^

    Apr 11, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Jump *edited*

    I like it! I really do! I'm a fan of these types of stories. But you have some grammar mistakes. “Jump” said a voice from behind him. There should be ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Chapter 1 (Victoria)

    There is a lot of potential here, but still errors. Capitalize your "I"s of course when referring to yourself. And always a new line with dialogue. "Suzy, Suzy wake up!" ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Your Career

    I'd like to go into psychology. Preferably criminal psychology. If not, there's teaching military history at universities or quantum physics with writing as a side job.

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Prologue, In The Beginning

    Lexi I wanted to help. People were dying everywhere, it didn’t seem fair for me to be able to sit on my couch, watch T.V. and not think about what ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: The Hero

    *waves* Another superhero lover! What do you prefer? Marvel or DC? I'm more for Marvel myself. And my novel right now is a superhero one. Well, the protagonists have superpowers. ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: A Witch

    You definitely have a good idea there. But there are some problems. Firstly, write out your numbers unless they're dates or large numbers, anything over thirty I believe. The beginning ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Heroes...

    I'm still trying to figure things out posting wise... Heheh. But um, this is basically like an introduction to the series I'm writing.

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Heroes...

    I’m here unwillingly, I had to remind myself. On any other occasion, I’d be somewhere else without these damn heroes giving me all these restrictions. It was just a different ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: *waves* Hello, all!

    Hi Fizza! Aw, thank you. I'm debating whether or not to reedit my stuff before I post it. See you around too!

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: The Hero

    *waves* Another superhero lover! What do you prefer? Marvel or DC? I'm more for Marvel myself. And my novel right now is a superhero one. Well, the protagonists have superpowers. ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: *waves* Hello, all!

    Thanks! Also, I love Flyleaf and that song is beautiful.

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: On Powers...

    I have a telepathic character. He can put up mental blocks, able to stop unintentionally hearing thoughts, but he's tired enough it'll drop. If he reads minds too often or ...

    Apr 10, 2010


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