Mochi

First thing's first: This is an excerpt from the middle of my novel, so things might not make sense. I'm worried about wording for the most part, though. Los Angeles ...

Ah, that's my problem for French writing. My French vocab is lower than my English one. xD

No, I think it's supposed to be like that? My prologue is after my chapter 1 too. =/

If you leave it blank, you can continue with the next steps. I've had to leave mine blank for now.

Christopher The word “apocalypse” strikes fear in almost anyone. “Armageddon,” “rapture,” and “holocaust” all bring the same sort of terror. For centuries, it signified the end of the

Did you put in a plot in the "plot" part? If so, that happened to me.

Hm, for some reason it won't let me get past step one. I click it and nothing happens. Edit: Okay, so I can get past step one. But only if ...

Ah, sounds nice. I'd love to go there one day. But I speak French, not Spanish. xD

Hi! Welcome to YWS! My name's Mochi. ^^ Spain? I'd love to visit there. Is it nice? /stupid question Ooh, I play clarinet too! But for school mainly. I love ...

I've written characters with really no line between villain and hero. But even my most heartless and ruthless characters are human. That's what I make my characters: human. I add ...

I write in italics for my telepaths. Usually like this: Estella! Please, he sent to her, not wanting to look back. Just let me do this... You know I can't, ...

Hm, for some reason it won't let me get past step one. I click it and nothing happens. Edit: Okay, so I can get past step one. But only if ...

*waves* Bonjour! Je parle le français, mais c'est un peu difficile avec mon ordi. Il n'a pas tous les accents. So my grammar tends to be off when I type ...

Hi! Welcome! I know the feeling. I have few writer friends, myself.

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