Moalex

Mm..right, right. Something for me to work on for the second draft.

Hi Halfblood girl! Thanks for the review!

Hi BlueAfrica! Thanks again for the review. I know this chapter was really different compared to the previous chapters. A short break from the normal story to show what Cecilia's ...

Hi Halfbloodgirl! Thanks for the review! I'll be sure to take note on the second draft for this chapter.

Hi ladylizz, yeh, this 10.5 chapter was honestly not intended to be part of the story that I was writing. It was meant as a filler for additional detail to ...

Hi BlueAfrica! I didn't respond to your review in chapter 10 part 3 because I saw that you reviewed 10.5. Ms. Reese has her own personal reasons for doing what ...

Hi Lightsong! Thanks for the review. You're right, I did just realize the sudden PoV slip, definitely going to change that on the second draft. Overall, this review gave me ...

Hi BlueAfrica! Wow, I did not think there would be anyone that took the time to dissect my character or story like that. You have no idea how much this ...

Hi Mea! Thanks for the review! I'll be sure to take notes on the parts you found confusing and make the second draft better!

Hi scribble! Thanks for the review. And yes, this chapter practically transitions from the previous chapter, so unless you've read the previous chapter, you wouldn't know why the beginning of ...

Hi Blueafrica! Thanks for the review! Definitely a lot of changes needed to make after receiving a review. Allow me to address some of the points that you provided. Characters: ...

Hi Lightsong! Thanks for the review, although there are some things that I need to point out. 1. Cecilia is currently 9 years old in this chapter. She is childish ...

Hey Holiday! Not going to lie, I have been waiting for your review. I was actually thinking of sending you a PM to let you know that I got a ...

Oh, and as to your comment on the Succubus about the whole, "Human in etc etc." From my understanding, succubus's tends to have a humane look with the addition of ...

Hi Lightsong! Thanks for helping get my work out of the green room. After reading your review, it really does help me look at things from another perspective. Like the ...