Moalex

Hi, Rawrafied! Sorry I didn't reply to your reviews earlier. I had to switch emails for my account to a different email so I could get updates for YWS. Again, ...

Hi, Rawrified! Thanks for the review and reading chapter 1 after seeing chapter 2. It really boosts my motivation to keep writing when I reach a reader's block. So let ...

Hey Holiday! Thanks for the comment, this really boosts my confidence and motivation. I've been wondering whether my story was any good or not. As you have said, he met ...

Hey MJ! Thanks for the review. I'll be sure to take your advice and make corrections once more. And don't be afraid to be harsher. As a matter of fact, ...

Adjustments have been made. Hopefully it's better this time.

Thank you for the suggestions and support! You have no idea how much it means to me. This is definitely helpful, in fact, it would actually encourage me if you ...

Should I cut them up?

I understand. Thanks for the tips and advices!

There are a lot of mysterious that I left unsaid for Fuyu because I want it to be a complete plot twist for later. Which is why I'm trying to ...

This really does help. And those comments are exactly what I'm looking for. I'm probably not going to be able to upload any later chapters to answer all the questions ...

Btw, I updated the chapter to a more recent version. Hopefully there's some improvements if you ever read it again.

Great! Thank you for the help!

Thanks for the review. You're right I actually do have a lot of pieces to this story left out because I'm still a novice writer. Being impatient and just wanting ...

Actually now that I look back at this, I just realized that this chapter isn't updated. I have this scenario written completely different than this one.

This is exactly what I've been looking for honestly. I've been meaning to look for ways to improve the story but I haven't really had any complains lately. Of course, ...