Moalex

In that case, could you give me an example of how to make said impact to the reader and the characters? I've taken most reviews seriously and have tried to ...

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Hello! Moalex here for a review. There was a prologue so I figured I'd get the chance to read the first part of your story. It appears I was wrong. ...

I will atleast say this and I am kind of embarrassed about it. I only proof-read this chapter once so that would explain the grammar issue.

Haha, it's okay. I noticed that some of the things you pointed out can be answered as you continue reading, like the dojo issue. Other things that I really wanted ...

I would like to provide insight and comments to help understand the story better as this is a review, but I honestly don't want to retype everything that was lost.

Okay so I tried to reply to everything I wanted to provide an insight on and when I posted it, it said the response was too long for the URL. ...

This definitely does, thanks for your help rawrafied.

Hi Icy! Thanks for the review. Every comment counts.

Hi! I was just notified of your response and I'll be honest, possibly one of my favorite times because I get to talk about my story with somebody. So allow ...

This most certainly does. Thanks for helping me in clarifying the changes I made!

Also I will say this, it will be some time before Chapter 4 will be ready. I've hit a couple of writer's block and in the past week and I'm ...

Hi Holiday! I never tire of seeing your review, and actually, I have no idea how to express my thanks on here except to keep writing. So in return, I ...

Words cannot describe how happy I am to read this review. can, but you know what I mean. Chapter 3 is finished already, I just need to review works in ...

I've made changes to the chapter. Hopefully, it's a little better now. I don't expect you to look over this lengthy chapter again nit-pick it but I just thought it'd ...

Hey BlueAfrica! Thanks for the review. I'll try to make adjustments so that it's clearer. Thanks!