Moalex

Thanks Holiday! Without a doubt, and I'm being 100% honest here. I think you lit the candles to my motivation again. Recently I've been working full-time, and I have lagging ...

Hi Mea! I just read the article that you linked me, and after doing so, it makes me want to give Omniscient POV a try. If it's not any trouble ...

Hi Gooseluck! Thanks for the review. Indeed, this is the first draft. As mentioned, I'm focused more on simply finishing my story first before I go back to make changes. ...

Hi Mea! Thanks for the review. I see that this is the second review now and this has definitely boosted my motivation a few degrees higher. Allow me to provide ...

Hi Holysocks. Thanks for the review. Allow me to deliver some insight to explain what went on through my mind when I wrote this. What I meant for "Dominant" mother ...

Regarding the whole kidnapping and everything, it is mentioned in the later chapter. Not in 6 but on chapter 7 which is the one I'm currently working on.

Thanks Mea, I'll keep your suggestions in mind for when I come back to edit this chapter.

:D

Thanks again as always Holiday. I always look forward to seeing your reviews. I'll be sure to let you know when I've made corrections to this chapter. As the other ...

Thanks BlueAfrica. And yeah, you two are right. Although I still have to go back to make adjustments. As you've probably read at the top, I've still not yet proof-read ...

I should also mention that I have not updated an edited version of this chapter. I should probably do that.

Hi Gina! Thanks for reviewing chapter 1. As you said, I've got an okay amount of reviews to keep me afloat, we both know it's never enough. It boosts my ...

I see, that's okay. You'll get enough eventually.

I see. This definitely broadens my view. I'll try to incorporate some of the examples and lesson that you just commented. Thanks for the help!

I also feel as though the only reason this chapter seemed very blunt and stale to you is that you did not read the previous chapter. As you mentioned at ...