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This was very touching! I do not normally read short stories like this. I always get stuck in unfinished novels :( . This was very touching and had a sweet ...

Michelle My Belle (Beatles) What time is it?

“Run Elijah!” Mrs. Marxley couldn't contain her excitement, she was off of the bleacher seat and leaning over the railing, trying to urge her only son to be just a ...

This story pleases me! I cannot wait to read even more! Keep me updated please! The story line is revealing itself piece by piece and soon enough I will be ...

Hey there! I guess I get to review your story! Yay! I really liked it! It was a sweet story and started to pull my interest more than a lot ...

I think that this is a sweet cover. It is simple and to the point! I sort of wish that there was more color though... People do not normally pick ...

I love the story! It is quite fun to see the mutiny unfold. In a way I feel as if I have not been properly introduced to the characters. We ...

"Brandon, please behave! For once on one trip, do not be a sour puss and leave the girl crying. You are a fine looking young man, but soon enough you ...

Fortunately an anti-acid was floating through the air and destroyed the cotton balls harmful add-ons.

A few nitpicks. The feel of someone's hand would be a welcomed comfort to me, I haddent felt the warm comforting feeling of another person for a very long time. ...

All of this story from part 1 to part three have been very interesting! You have a big imagination and are a very skilled author. Keep up the good work. ...

Count me in! This is a great idea. I am very happy that you are doing it. I already have the first section from yesterday, except the last little portion, ...

This is a fabulous piece! I did not know what I was getting into when I opened it up, but I am very happy that I did! I could not ...

Unfortunately, the cotton balls were made of acid

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