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Re: The Tavern
Maggie and Murtuza sit and stare at HPR as they listen to her never ending one-sided conversation. When she finally finishes, a strange girl walks up to HPR and looks ...
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Re: "Kill" the person above you!
Stargazer, well, they were playing the rain under a large leaf, jumping into every single puddle. They weren't wearing any shoes and not a whole lot of clothes, consequently, Stargazer ...
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Re: What is the first word you think of when I say...........
awkward
Dec 26, 2011 -
Re: The singing game
-evfreak13 Oh, that "Girl named Tennessee." (Needtobreathe) What is your favorite meal?
Dec 26, 2011 -
Re: The Tavern
Maggie (the M in MJD) comes in through a side door being very careful not to make any noise. She realizes that she is too late, Eve has gone. The ...
Dec 26, 2011 -
Re: Name In A Hat
Sure, I'm game! I will check tomorrow morning and Tues. evening. I write a lot of different things, but I don't do poetry well. I can, but I prefer not ...
Dec 26, 2011 -
Re: Princess Lynnea: Chapter III
Here are the second and first chapters Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Lynnea waited by the iron door. Will I ever see him again? I wish that Father would ...
Dec 24, 2011 -
Re: 24 Hours
Hey there! I don't normally review poems, but I happen to like haikus! This was a great poem or rather string of poems. I loved how you strung it all ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Would You Understand?
Wow! I was not expecting that until right after the comment about "I love you the most" and then it sort of clicked. That was a really moving story that ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: What is the first word you think of when I say...........
weeble
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: "Kill" the person above you!
You decided to go ahead and do it anyway, but what laid ahead was a giant oven that burned you (a cupcake) to ashes anyway. Your very soul floated out ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: I Won't Go Home Without You - Maroon 5
"Nina, wait. please don't go. We can talk this over. Give me one more chance to make it right! Please Nina!" Jimmy grabbed for the lifeline once more. He watched ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: The Charms of Opher (Part 1)
There was is nothing normal about our family. Instead of watching TV at night, we would would should go. stand on ladders and drop balloons filled with paint on top ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Um, hi...
Your story sounds super interesting! I would love to read more! Welcome to YWS! I hope you get at least a few billion stories sorted out through here. Not necessarily ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Antolsai - 2
Eli fell for 10 seconds before he hit the ground. The arrival of the 16 year old boy was almost a bouncy landing, like jumping on an old stiff mattress. ...
Jul 28, 2011
