Mizzle

I can see how you don't think removing "to" in that line works, however it sounds much better to me, at least, if it is removed. Just my $0.02, though! ...

Aw, Kammie, this is wonderful! Truly and incredibly awesome. I'm impressed. :D So, I loved the story behind this piece. The title made me wonder, and you followed through with ...

Marcie: "Shut up, Jessica. The dang tiger was gonna kill me, or all of us, so it's better of dead. It's just a tiger, anyways. Who cares?" I snapped, the ...

I'm saving a spot. :D Be back later with a profile, yo.

Hi there, Lupis! :D This is a lovely piece of work you have, here. I mean, 'tis beautiful. I could never conjure up a drawing as good as this. XD. ...

Hey there, Fred! :D So, this is a nice poem. I liked it. However, as always, I have just a few nitpicks... 1.) As Child pointed out, on the second ...

Hi there, Jeanette! Welcome to YWS! I hope you are enjoying it here. :D Also, let me remind you, you'll get more reviews on your own work if you go ...

Marcie: "Get back," Jessica muttered. I rolled my eyes and stayed where I was, while the rest of them backed up. I squinted my eyes, trying to make out just ...

You need to continue this. :D I loved this! You had me laughing, and that's hard to do, cuz I'm in a bad mood today! :P Anyways, great job, great ...

XD. Thanks! I have a lot of people tell me that...after all, fish are friends, not food! I lufs the Nemo movie. Hehe. :D Tata! -Mizz

Ashlee, daughter of Ares: It was time to fight. Adrenaline rushed through me, even if this was just practice. Either way, it was my favorite part of the day. It ...

Yup. :D Also, we really need the other players to GET POSTING. >:(

Marcie: "And how do you plan to do that? 'Cause so far, when we needed food, you gave us some bugs." I sneered. Jessica sighed, "Bugs are high in protein ...

D: I'll try very hard to get up tomorrow, but seeing as I'm on vacay in Hawaii....:/ I'll try, though.

Yeah. Like, duh! ;) -- If you could become immortal only if you were turned into a zebra, would you do it?