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Hey, iamjemo! Nice to meet you. :D This poem has a nice idea behind it, but I feel that you didn't pull it off to its highest potential. I agree ...

Hey there, Yoha! This is a truly fantastic poem, a great example of "show not tell," or in your case, "hear not...tell?" XD. I actually disagree with Snoink about the ...

Hey, there! Wow. This was a nice poem, for starters. Very short and sweet; cuts right to the point, which is nice. I like your style of poetry here. Just ...

Hey there! I really liked the first four lines. They were, to me, the highlight of the entire poem. So beautiful--all in four wonderful lines! Eek! XD. But, like Snoink ...

Hey there! When the lights go out And I'm stranded alone I'll think of you to comfort my fear And drive away my anxiety. My hands will search for you ...

Hey there, Bookslug! Nice to meet you. Okay, so you have some really great photos here...let's do a quick overview of each one, 'kay? Picture One: This is completely beautiful. ...

Hello there. :D Like the others, I prefer the first picture of the Goddess of Cosmos over this one, for many reasons. The other one was quite beautiful and glowing, ...

Hey there! I really like the look of this picture. But like June said, I can't tell how much you actually added to the original picture; I agree that you ...

Hello there! I'm assuming you wanted your focal point to be the flower, eh? Indeed, the flower is quite beautiful--the colors are so majestic and beautiful. However, the background is ...

Hi Tori! Haikus are beautiful forms of poetry, originating from the Japanese. A haiku is composed of three lines and usually a noticeable grammatical break. A haiku is a non-rhymed ...

"Emo" is just more like teenagers writing stuff down in their diary, but some "emo poetry" can be very good, so keep that in mind. However, "emo" is not really ...

I think She Walks In Beauty by Lord Byron is a wonderful poem. :D

Hey, Pal! Well, I have to say, this is a nice poem. Like Snoink mentioned, though, your rhyming seem sort of forced and didn't make sense at time. The main ...

Sweet! :D

Whoa, these are pretty cool! I think on the first one of Baby Silver, the legs seem a little odd. But that's all I could find that screamed "fix me!". ...