Mizzle

Hey there! Oooh. :O It does look shiny! Nice work, it's a very cool effect. It's your signature inside the S, right? Because it's a tad distracting, I would have ...

Hey there! Whoa, this is a pretty good picture. It's very beauitful. The only problem is that it's a tad crooked! You always want to make sure you have the ...

Hey there, Kings! This was a nice poem; I liked it a lot. It had a nice theme that I'm sure we can all relate to sometime or another in ...

Hey there, Hibiscus! Overall, this is a nice poem with a great idea. It could have been pulled off a little better with better language use, though! So here's my ...

Hey there, Hibiscus! :D Okay, seeing as you have about five whole pages of pictures on there, I doubt it would benefit you if I did an individual review of ...

Whoa. You nailed the whole "boring as heck!" thing, which is what you were going for, is it not? The plot is kind of pointless, but eh...it's supposed to be ...

Hey, Eddie! How's it going? :D Okay, so I think this is a very nice poem you've written. *luffs* I disagree with Snoink completely when she says the first and ...

Hey there, S'getti! Mizzle here, as promised. ;) Overall, I think this is a very nice piece. It has a ton of potential, and I can't wait to see what ...

Captain Clare Davies: Twice! The Captain silently fumed. Charlie was asking her where they where headed, disrupting her tiny moment of peace. It was bad enough that Ryker and Mela ...

Corey Flint: Helpless was how he felt. It was also the next song. And it was about Zoe. He struggled to stay composed, not wanting to ruin it for the ...

Captain Clare Davies: She strutted along the deck of her ship, eyes watching the horizon. The sun was fading, telling her the time was late afternoon or early evening. The ...

Marcie Jones: "Don't tell me to shut up," I snapped at Jessica, and then stopped talking with an exasperated sigh. I pushed past Jessica and started whisper-shouting. "Look. These cannibals ...

Corey Flint: I grinned mischievously and ran onstage, Shilo, Sam, and Ever following behind me. I had my drumsticks in my hands, and I banged the drums a couple of ...

Hey there, RD! Nice to meet you. GAH! Science poems. *luffs* This is really very nice. The only thing I would say is that when you say "There, but our ...

Hey there, Sol. Nice seeing you around these poetry forums. ^__^ Anyhoo, this doesn't look like much of a poem to me. Poems don't need to rhyme, but they need ...