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Hi Lunasol21, This is my first time reviewing your work! And I really enjoyed reading this! The poem had fantastic imagery and I could see everything you were describing so ...

Haha, hey darkwingz! It's so good to know that you're excited to join, great enthusiasm is a great gift (I think) as an aspiring writer! There is so much to ...

Hey AtticusGallows, Ok, well, this (I agree) does make me feel a little sad and lost. But I feel even though there are only two, very short, bittersweet lines, its ...

Hi LastPaladin, This is my first time reviewing your work, and thank-you for posting something amazingly good to review! I think Narrative Poetry is somewhat more difficult than other forms ...

Hey MidnightWriter, Can I start off by saying I absolutely love your username! It's a really great (and mysterious!) one! Something I also like is your love and passion for ...

Haha, hey BillKaulitz89, Firstly, welcome to YWS! Germany seems like such a great place and I definitely want to visit there someday! So your friends told you to join this ...

My first year on YWS - and I have loved every moment, every story (ok, not every...but you know what I mean) and loved the community and friendliness everyone has ...

Hey cupcake! Ok, first time reviewing your work! The poem - short, sweet and to the point. Very simple and flowed really well. I really loved the last two lines ...

Hi OphelieLiv, This was such a great read and definitely very interesting. It was also mature, it didn't poke around with the whole idea of sexual intercourse, it stayed mature ...

Hey mystiquevander, It's pieces like yours when I wonder 'Where is the "applaud" button?'. A truly magnificent piece to read, it is definitely now one of my favourites on this ...

Well, our school library has a webpage, and one of the tabs is "get published" and underneath, there was the link to YWS. Many of my friends joined then eventually ...

Hey Lightningbolt, This is my first time reviewing your work (and reviewing anything for a month...) and I liked the concept of it. I pretty much got what you were ...

American: 11 Canadian: 3 English: 4 Filipino: 2 Finnish: 1 French: 1 Indian: 4 Irish: 1 Italian: 1 Puerto Rican: 1 Scottish: 1 South African: 1 South Korean: 1 Welsh: ...

Hi stargazer9927, I didn't mind this poem at all! I felt all the messages in this poem were soul-deep and I thought they were all very true. You commented before ...

Hi there xwritingprincess21x, This was a lovely poem to read! It had a nice flow and I loved the rhyming scheme! And I absolutely love the first line, what a ...