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Hi cupcake, It was definitely a short and sweet poem! Well done! And I like the fact that it rhymed and you spoke about the environment though it. Really great. ...

Hey everyone, Thanks sooo much for your kind words! Origami really is great, isn't it? But I have to admit, my photography skills are pretty average, so I'm really showing ...

So I just found a new love for origami! paperturtle.JPG paperfish.JPG papercrane_picnik.jpg paperswan.JPG origami puppet pigs.JPG

Hey IgnisandGlacialis! For your first limerick poem, this was great! It really was! You had the right idea, it was a bit sing-songish - which is what I really liked ...

Hi WaywardBird, I really loved this poem! It's true - this style really does catch your attention and I really love how it was written! It's very simple to read, ...

Hi Flower~Child, I agree with TheWalkinDude, that there isn't really a basis or proper foundation to this poem, but I really enjoyed its eccentricity anyway! It was really light and ...

Hey RazHuni, Haha, I absolutely loved this! To be honest, at first, I wasn't sure if I'd make the decision to read it, because it is not a commonly talked ...

Mystiquevander, Honestly, I wasn't sure if I should be commenting on something like this. But I thought you should hear this... It is so deeply emotional (as the others have ...

Hey SilentRain, I don't think I have much constructive crticism since everything has really, already been said, hasn't it? So, here's my few hundred characters of a compliment! This was ...

Hi LastPaladin, This was a good poem, it really was. If I'm not mistaken, it's a person has moved on with their life, their life which is nothing like it ...

Hey Darkehthewriter, Firstly, welcome to YWS - it's a pretty warm community here, so you should settle in really well. So, a writer for 5-6 years, eh? haha. That's longer ...

Hey lindseebee, Welcome to YWS! You will absolutely love it here! It's a really great place for aspiring writers and we hope to see some of your work soon! From ...

LastPaladin, What can I say, but WOW! I will never mis-use the words "richness" and "depth" again after reading this, because this, my friend, was rich and deep ! To ...

Hi Wondergirl59, I really enjoyed reading your poem, it flowed really well, and you wrote during a time when you were feeling down, you wrote it for an escape and ...

Hi J.R.S, Wow! This didn't just touch my heart, but struck it with empowering emotion! Beautiful. Something else I'll compliment you on is the title, "The Thought Inside My Heart". ...