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Miyakko

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Don't Cry for Me

    Hi! I won't be too nit-picky - it seems KatarinaLatisse has done it! Take her advice, haha. I liked the simple wording in this, I think it worked well, and ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Squills - The YWS News Re: R.I.P Real Music and Creative Genius

    It seems these days, modern music is going "under the knife". It's not as real and grounded like it was, or like it should remain. It seems another endangered species ...

    Jun 15, 2011
  • Squills - The YWS News Re: Ban Live Cattle Exports

    Horrific footage sparks move to ban live exports Updated Mon May 30, 2011 11:19pm AEST Two federal independents will tomorrow move to end all live exports within three years after ...

    Jun 15, 2011
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Ban Live Exporting

    Thanks Nate! These are great sources. Hey everyone, the sites above are the ideal places you want to go to find out more, especially if you would like to take ...

    Jun 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A pity, Beauty

    Hi KnightlyAngel09, This was truly stunning and very beautiful. I thought it was gentle, yet it still had some emotional strength - it wasn't brittle and fall to pieces. I ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Letter to a Valentine

    KnightlyAngel09, I thought this was great!It was different, which is what really got me. You were still able to confess and show the feelings of true love, but it wasn't ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Painting

    A simple brush to channel the spirit. Mello, I just found this line to be so true. Actually, I've just completed a painting of mine today! (You can see it ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Ban Live Exporting

    For the most of you that don't know, I'm an Australian and an environmental activist. In the news the past few weeks, a recent animal abuse issue has been revealed ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Rebecca Black's Friday

    You know the hormones are kicking in when the hardest decision to make is where to sit...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Stupid Teenage Essence

    Hi SakuraFallsSweetly♥, This was really great! I loved how it rhymed and it flowed really well. Maybe you could even push it a bit more, and go a bit deeper ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Charlie The Cheat

    Hi Sopster01, Honestly, I can't critique this...it's too good! So here I shall babble on about how loveable it was! So you can totally ignore this so-called "review". An incredible ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I'm not that kind

    Hey FLyerS, This is the first review I've done in a while, so here goes... It was really great! It was different from all those other romantic, love poems I've ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Hope Lives

    Hi BehindtheMask, I really didn't mind this poem! I'll leave all grammatical and rhyming errors alone (since most have already been said!) so I won't hassle you anymore on that! ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Where Are You?

    Hi HaydenMacaw, I really liked this poem! I didn't mind the repetition at all. Some lines could be extended though, to help make the poem flow better, making it smoother. ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Arachnophobia

    Hi Persephoneia, Wow! Now this is a dark poem! Amazing! The descriptions were incredibly clear, and I felt all the feeling that your character felt. It literally made me gasp! ...

    Feb 24, 2011


I would be a terrible novel protagonist.
— mellifera