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Re: Don't Cry for Me
Hi! I won't be too nit-picky - it seems KatarinaLatisse has done it! Take her advice, haha. I liked the simple wording in this, I think it worked well, and ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: R.I.P Real Music and Creative Genius
It seems these days, modern music is going "under the knife". It's not as real and grounded like it was, or like it should remain. It seems another endangered species ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Ban Live Cattle Exports
Horrific footage sparks move to ban live exports Updated Mon May 30, 2011 11:19pm AEST Two federal independents will tomorrow move to end all live exports within three years after ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Ban Live Exporting
Thanks Nate! These are great sources. Hey everyone, the sites above are the ideal places you want to go to find out more, especially if you would like to take ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: A pity, Beauty
Hi KnightlyAngel09, This was truly stunning and very beautiful. I thought it was gentle, yet it still had some emotional strength - it wasn't brittle and fall to pieces. I ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: A Letter to a Valentine
KnightlyAngel09, I thought this was great!It was different, which is what really got me. You were still able to confess and show the feelings of true love, but it wasn't ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Painting
A simple brush to channel the spirit. Mello, I just found this line to be so true. Actually, I've just completed a painting of mine today! (You can see it ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Ban Live Exporting
For the most of you that don't know, I'm an Australian and an environmental activist. In the news the past few weeks, a recent animal abuse issue has been revealed ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Rebecca Black's Friday
You know the hormones are kicking in when the hardest decision to make is where to sit...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: My Stupid Teenage Essence
Hi SakuraFallsSweetly♥, This was really great! I loved how it rhymed and it flowed really well. Maybe you could even push it a bit more, and go a bit deeper ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Charlie The Cheat
Hi Sopster01, Honestly, I can't critique this...it's too good! So here I shall babble on about how loveable it was! So you can totally ignore this so-called "review". An incredible ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: I'm not that kind
Hey FLyerS, This is the first review I've done in a while, so here goes... It was really great! It was different from all those other romantic, love poems I've ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Hope Lives
Hi BehindtheMask, I really didn't mind this poem! I'll leave all grammatical and rhyming errors alone (since most have already been said!) so I won't hassle you anymore on that! ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Where Are You?
Hi HaydenMacaw, I really liked this poem! I didn't mind the repetition at all. Some lines could be extended though, to help make the poem flow better, making it smoother. ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Arachnophobia
Hi Persephoneia, Wow! Now this is a dark poem! Amazing! The descriptions were incredibly clear, and I felt all the feeling that your character felt. It literally made me gasp! ...
Feb 24, 2011
