Miyakko

This isn't a poem, nor a story, its about a writer's serendipity, read it and relate to it... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A writer's serendipity: after thinking, we write, we're exploring

I love the idea behind this poem! That birds have their own little society upon which they run. I especially loved the last paragraph remembers what his ancestors did! Very ...

What a great concept for a poem - fire! The actual poem itself I feel could have a better flow, and make it a bit more connected to our inner ...

I really enjoyed this poem! Like the other one I reviewed, this isn't dark too. Its got a brightness that seems to shine through the darkness. I love how you've ...

omg...about halfway through your story and I have to say - its stunning! It is sooo compelling to read and reminds me of my favourite book - the knife of ...

Hi everyone, this is my first short-story that I've posted on YWS. Please read it and please suggest many changes to help change it for the better. It is my ...

I didn't mind this poem at all! It was short - but not too short and it was simple and easy to keep up with. It also didn't seem too ...

Good poem to the friend that wrote this - its not too bad. I agree with some of the others - it could've been longer and if it were there'd ...

My first impression of the poem was good. I know this poem has a greater meaning to it than just the words you've displayed and because I know its meaning, ...

Its a good poem but I do agree with Flower~Child with some of the lines of the poem. I felt this two lines flowed nicely: For each tear that I ...