Miyakko

Hey LittleLionWoman, It's pretty good so far. I like where you're heading with it. But it does need to be longer and you need to explain thoroughly what you mean. ...

Hey firewriter, This was flawless, I thought. It had the right amount of expressionand feeling, and you got out all that you needed to say. I thought the length of ...

Hey Amberchelli, This was so great and a little different to what I've previously read. My only critique? Just watch your grammar in some areas, know when to step back ...

Hey paperbackheart, Great poem and loved the journey you took me through. A little constructive criticism? The rhyming made the poem flow really well, but maybe try it without rhyming ...

Hey qaralynn, Great work on this poem. Why your 'words were silent' was made clear in this and it was really well brought across. But while I was reading this, ...

Hey Matthews, Ok, so you've been hammered with lovely constructive criticism, I won't saturate it any more. I thought this was very clever! I loved it. The rhyming worked really ...

Hey TheCircleWriter, Great poem. Short, simple, to-the-point. Very well written. My critique? Throw in a few more descriptive feelings and emotional extremes, then you've really got something going fo

Hey DevanEWilliams, This was a really good poem, I really enjoyed the simplicity of it all. But even though 'Hummingbird' was the poem's title, I think there needs to be ...

Hey LastPaladin, This is all a poem should be and more. Your use of language is great and your poetry is so grand, and honestly, its an honour and a ...

Hi Matthew, Overall, this was a pretty sweet poem. But I think some definition is really going to help it and make it all clearer. I'm guessing you were talking ...

Hey dragonlover92, This was pretty neat. It was short and simple and I think you got out everything you wanted to say without flowing overboard. I think the last two ...

AngelMarie, This is amazingly good. It's very sweet and incredibly expressive, and the use of all those similes was too perfect. Just be careful not to mistake 'to' for 'too'. ...

Hey paintingtherain97, This was great. Really, it was. I can tell you're very passionate about youth issues (so am I) and speaking up and doing something. This is a great ...

Hey pyro, I haven't reviewed in a while, so excuse my forseen roughness! This was fantastic! As AwsomeSocks said, short and too-the-point. You've done a great job with the rhyming ...

Hi Spike71294, It's very interesting what you just said. By no means is this article saying music itself is dead or dying, but true musicianship and music with more than ...