Miyakko

Hey Kingolions! I didn't read this, but I'm halfway through the one you printed for me. It's amazing! You've captured everyone's emotions so delicately and beautifully in this. You've captured ...

Hey Kingolions, I enjoyed reading through the darkness of this poem. I especially loved the line: "in a prison of my mind." I'd like some more description about the bridge ...

Hi Watch, This poem is good for a first post. I like the concept of question the subject. But, I'm not entirely sure its a poem. I haven't written any ...

Hey ROC, I liked this piece. I thought some of your other poems were better, but this was nice and simple. It was a good concept, not really a story, ...

Hey Cap! This is absolutely hilarious! I was laughing throughout the poem! It's so funny! It wasn't much of a poem, but it did rhyme, and had a...nice...flow?? For a ...

Hi Cap, These quote are pretty good. The first and last ones were my favourites. I agree with Kingolions, these quotes do make me think a little. The third one ...

Hey Cap, Firstly, I thought the concept was good. It would help if you extended it, and made it about you and someone having a perfect moment together and then ...

Hey Yuri, Pretty good poem! I did enjoy it. It was different to some of the other ones I've read, this wasn't as deep, it was lighter and happier in ...

Hey ROC, It was a good poem. Not too bad. I somewhat agree with the others, it could've gone a bit further - to...somewhere. At the end, it reminded me ...

Hi King, Wow! Another great piece! You should get all your poems published into a book! Seriously. This was so simple and short and wasn't complicated to read. I thought ...

Hey King, LOVED THIS! You said before the poem that the poem wasn't great. I think you're better than you think you are! This poem was AMAZINGLY WONDERFUL! I loved ...

Hey KAH, I really, really enjoyed this poem. Someone said it was very direct, I agree with that. It was so straightforward and wasn't confusing! You got the message out ...

Hi KAH, Really lovely piece! I thought it was pretty good. It wasn't too long and wasn't boring which was what I liked. As some of the others have said, ...

Hi Skins! You say you're not much of a write, but I think your better than you think. Itwas actually pretty good, and the message got through. It was a ...

Hi Yuri! Again, this is another beautiful piece. But I thought some of your other ones were better though, sorry. The visuals in this were amazing, and you described everything ...