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Hey pazey13, This is a pretty good poem. I also like the comparison to this and I thought this poem had really good imagery. I would change the second line ...

Hi TheNewHero, This is my first time reviewing your work, and what an amazing poem to review! It was full of emotions and feelings that ran throughout the veins of ...

Hi S.S. Rose. Wow! This is an amazing poem! I really like the title too, don't worry too much about it. I haven't really got any criticisms, so here's the ...

Hi TheBigCheese, Really loving that twist at the end! I think this is my favourtie out of the two stories you've posted so far! Try to add a few more ...

Hi Hibiscus, Firstly, this is an amazing poem! I don't really have much bad things to say, so I'll spill the good stuff. It seems like a lengthy poem when ...

Hiya Pointe2drama, To be honest, this poem could be so much more. I think the concept was there but a lot was missing. I agree with our fellow reviewers, you ...

Hi Persephoneia, At first when I saw this poem, I questioned whether it would be good or not due to it's short length...but I really liked it! It's short but ...

Hi DannielleLovesong, This is my first time reviewing your work so I'll start with the bad stuff and end with dessert - if you get what I mean. ;) I ...

Hey Cap! I actually didn't mind this too much. Don't give up on poetry, you'll get better the more you write. This could be better sorted into stanzas, making it ...

Hey CaptianRandom, This is great for your first haiku! Really good job! I love the concept of it and the title "The art of nature and the nature of art" ...

Hey CaptianRandom! Firstly, you did an absolutely impressive job on the clay sculpture of a mockingjay. I must say, I haven't read the book (and don't intend to for a ...

Hey ROC! Another great haiku! And this is definitely 5, 7, 5. Love the subject, you wrote about nature and its elements including solids, gases and liquids in their natural ...

Hi Durriedog, This is my first time reviewing your work. What a great piece to review! I loved the story line. It was a great narrative poem! The whole concept ...

Hi ROC, For a first haiku, its amazingly wonderful! It is relevant to the title, and you have explained each season so beautifully. It's such a smooth and gentle poem, ...

Hey Hibiscus, This is such a beautiful poem! I really felt the emotion and feeling in it. Was this a poem about coming out? Because it felt like that's what ...