MisunderstoodDreamer

I love this poem, especially the way you organized it: what they did, what you don't want to do, what you do want to do, again the things they did, ...

First, let me just say that I love photography! Your pictures were wonderful. You do an amazing job of shallow depth of field and unusual perspective. I also like you ...

I loves this! It really seemed to flow. You do a really good job with your endings. They always seem to sum it all up and give the whole poem ...

I know this isn't much of a review, but I really liked it! Of course I'm still new to reviewing. I'm looking forward to reading more of your works!

I thought the poem was a bit broken and sketchy. It felt like the line breaks weren't in the right spots. Try to make it flow a little more, unless ...

This is... AMAZING !!! It shows that poems don't have to rhym to sound good (unless there was run and I just missed I somehow). You are so descriptive! I ...

This is amazing! It makes me think back to all those times. It really flowed as I read it; nothing seemed out the ordinary. Everything fit in! I think (and ...

This is amazing! It makes me think back to all those times. It really flowed as I read it; nothing seemed out the ordinary. Everything fit in! I think (and ...

You're amazingly descriptive! I love winter, and I think this poem let's look at it from a new view. You show all the things that happen in winter. The only ...

This is really good! I love spring and you did an amazing job describing it. The only thing I would add is some senses. You talked about the birds and ...

Oh okay. Thanks!

Could I join this?

Right sorry. Ice been having a hard time with some thing lately and also really busy. I'll post soon...

I would jump in but I'm still not sure what positions are available for my character.

So, are we going to continue this? I hate to be impatient but it seems that every time I join an SB it dies right after I post my profile!