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Re: My Marine
Hey Amber. I see you're new. It's wonderful to have you. Your post count is impressive for it having been two days. good job on reviewing so much already! That's ...
Sep 3, 2007 -
Re: Condemnation of Grammatical Poetry
Audience. It's about the audience. I get this. But it's indulgent, it won't help people. You can't help the kids if the kids have no clue what you're saying. I ...
Sep 3, 2007 -
Re: Compared
Sweetie, it's fine, you're young. Writers don't like to read thing like this, they're too easy. I can get feeling jealous, but this isn't even jealousy, this is simple inadequacy. ...
Sep 3, 2007 -
Re: Screaming Roses
GAH! this is from when I was 14! Please don't read it! *head/desk*
Sep 3, 2007 -
Re: You'll Forget
Oh Penguin, sweetie, please just ignore Brad. He has only one review setting: "This is horrible, toss it." I actually remember one hilarious post of his on a poem, "What ...
Sep 3, 2007 -
Re: How do YOU get last names for a story charater?
Hey, Watch a movie. Read end credits. Find Last Name You Like. Easy!
Sep 3, 2007 -
Re: What exactly does contemporary mean?
Meh, I'll take a stab at it. The thing is that it's hard to define. (And I'm no use at these things, so don't quote my guess). If it's contemporary, ...
Sep 3, 2007 -
Re: Copyright Infringment...
Hey I wondered this now that I'm actually going to be published. But I think we're al pretty safe here. The thing is, it's so easy to take something off ...
Sep 3, 2007 -
Re: Condemnation of Grammatical Poetry
Can I say that this post helped no one and annoyed everyone?
Sep 3, 2007 -
Re: Toss-Up
wow sam. wow. powerful. no critiques, just general wowness. yes I said wowness. my brain feels like unintelligible muck. I think I spelled unintelligible wrong. that's how wowed I am.
Sep 3, 2007 -
Re: He loves her
This doesn't suck at all. If you want to see the utter crap that I was writing at your age, check out the sadly reincarnated "screaming roses" that Gadi critiqued...(oh ...
Sep 3, 2007 -
Re: The Four Princesses of Illyria Comments
Ari, If you keep posting, I'll keep reading it. :) I'm the worst with fantasy stories though, so I'm technically your "reluctant readers" audience. If you can snare me, you ...
Sep 3, 2007 -
Re: 500 Words
Chilling. But I have no idea what was going on. ;) The first paragraph was especially good. I didn't think I'd like it to begin with but it grabbed me. ...
Sep 3, 2007 -
Re: Princess
Hmm...I can say I didn't like it ;) It didn't hold my attention. I'll tell you that writing from a dog's point of view isn't an exactly original idea. I ...
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Re: Deleted!
I can't even say anything. I can only sit here and be wowed.
Sep 3, 2007
