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Re: the riders
I see a lot in this, but I also think you need to follow the other's advice and REVISE REVISE REVISE!!! but you have a good story in the works, ...
Jan 17, 2005 -
Re: Please Help Me...
This is brilliant! The others got all of the real crit, but it's SO good! I truly felt your pain, and I know how you feel. One of my friends ...
Jan 17, 2005 -
Re: This is Not and Apology (but it is a poem...thats the title)
well, I disagree with the others. I really liked this and I don't think you should change it. I got a perfect view of what you were saying. It was ...
Jan 17, 2005 -
Re: A new book, hopefully
This is a co-write i'm doing with a friend of mine. I had to write the beginning, with the boy as the main person, and she's starting the next day. ...
Jan 17, 2005 -
Re: Prose: "Chronicles of the Dhampir: Emergence"
oh, wow! You are seriouslyTOO good! This book is seriously TOO GOOD! IT was so disgusting yet totally believable. And I thought my writing was grisly...ack! This sent chills up ...
Jan 17, 2005 -
Re: Opening to (hopefully) a novel
hi, and I'm new, just so you know. But I have to tell you, this is probably one of the best pieces of fiction I've ever read on one of ...
Jan 17, 2005