Misty

Okay I know I just posted yesterday but I reviewed two pieces of work before posting this so technically I'm in the clear, right? This is the beginning of my ...

Lynn. I meant Lynn. Misty Lynn. Although Misty Kynn is an interesting name...sort of like Misty Skye. I like that name too. Sorry about that!

very brilliant! Aside from some grammatical errors-which you can probably find if you read through it again yourself-it's wonderful. Super duper. J/k. No really it's great. I love the imagery ...

Well, it's definately interesting, but it sounds more like a list than a story. It's like, "I did this, then I did that, then I did this..." if you know ...

haha almighty site admin. You're funny. Thank you for the crit, I'll consider it. Should I just post the next section here? well I guess I will... This is a ...

I'm sorry for being completely ignorant, but what are those? yeah I know I'm a sophomore in high school and I don't even know what an adjetive is...blah blah blah ...

I think you're right. I just read through it quickly and I was like, "whoa, that's confusing" and it's never seemed confusing before. Ty!

Yeah, I'm native american, and my mom thought that was a cool native name without being too...abnormal. I love it too. It's cause she heard the name Misty at a ...

For the record, I'm Misty, *but I go by my first and middle name* I'm fifteen years old and...I live in the state of Washington. I've been seriously writing for ...

you never posted that last part at RK! I really love this story! Good job! Yeah, that's how I was with The room, I kept writing and writing because I ...

I kind of agree with you guys, but stories seem to come to me the way poetry does. Only the first three or four chapters, though. Then I have to ...

I just got kicked off. It SUCKED because I really liked that webiste! And now they're pretty mad at me so I'm staying away...this site is awesome though. I like ...

Honestly, I liked the beginning, but the rest didnt' hold my attention. I don't know why. Good job though, I guess. Well, I didn't like it. I can't put my ...

He's falling. Oh dear. I suppose this was a short story, then? Yes, it was very good. I enjoyed it. Thank you. for what? I don't know, I'm tired.

Good job! I like all of this, especially the begining, how the dragons started it, Haha that was great. You're a really talented writer. I like the fairy tale world ...