Misty

I've been banned from that sight since July...I think every1 just hated me. I was a little bit more immature back them. *sighs* Yeah but this site is way better! ...

4. Circle by Plus One 5. Forever by Plus One 6. On Fire by Switchfoot 1. True by Ryan Cabrera ooh la...that's exactly like me! those are some of my ...

tiny font, "burn the rich," that's funny. okay...lemme think I like this because it has a really nice flow, and it gives me an awesome picture. The one line i ...

nope. that was like...a sort of half-awake thing where I saw myself looming over the "pool of insanity."

ty, great advice you guys.

Life By Misty Lynn Ellingburg Life-seems like Somewhere to be without being As though inside a portrait Watching without seeing As though locked inside myself Touching without feeling Something lackin

I'm...sick...really sick. Like almost throwing up sick. You're lucky you're on the other side of the comp because it's definately contagoius...been around my whole school about three times. oh shoot. ...

it is REALLY sad. And besides, I think both Ashlee Simpson AND Hilary Duff rock...I have all three of the them...and I like them...and they make me happy.

yeah, uh....lemme think. I'm bad at critting poems! :( But, the words that didn't flow (for me) were: Frankenstein, the part about him wrapping himself in cotton wool..and... Well I ...

thanks you guys so much for the crit. And here's something I wrote with the same imagery in mind...but different. I don't know if I like it or not. Insanity ...

Many tears make the pool The pool of insanity Which holds the empty and the soulless in its grip It feeds off of my blood Which rolls drop by drop ...

Pera is...oh dear...Pera is a stranger which makes him/her mysterious...yeah, mysterious.

uh, no it's different, very much so. BUt thank you. I only wish that MORE PEOPLE would crit this. :shock:

well to answer your poll *I hate polls* it's not deep. Like sam said, it needs some spice. I didn't feel anything as I read it, just, "wow, another...weird poem." ...

yeah their new one isn't all that grea.t I was disappointed. a lil bit. Like song #2, #7 though