Misty

I liked it, though the references to food were confusing

yeah. She quit the co-write so now I'm supposed to be working on it on my own but I haven't...although I should, our plot rocked. But oh well, can't win ...

if I ever finish writing this, you'll find out. it's supposed to be kinda vague. Thanks for the crit!

*shock* beautiful....*wipes tear* do not respond to an e-mail, long after the fact, and confess your unadulterated love for pasta and wild parties and crazy little boys, just don’t. okay? ...

:D Sam this is adorable! It was really funny and sweet. I liked it alot! The repitition of, "yeah, like that," was pretty sweet. "but now you have the problem ...

Z you're really funny and sarcastic..."I like chicken..." haha. you're too sweet to leave...even if you do have incredible opinions that get blown out of proportion. :D

I like it. :( but I have no critique, because there's nothing to critique. I have a question: Sure.I’ll ask. I reply, quickly covering the corner of the slate with ...

well, I am flattered. "ZZAP, not another post attempting to increase your stature with the ladies on the board" yes, it did increase his stature with me. it was sweet, ...

no, I think he's staying cuz he posted that awesome poem! :D:D:D

:D it's cool. I posted something harsh once too. I understand. :wink:

I'm kinda worried about Erin, she said she was depressed and stuff, and she quit our co-write. But she says she still goes to her web-site, so I'm gonna try ...

it's actually really amazing. I like it alot. but it's so sad...good job. :D I don't have crit, I like it as it is.

no, it wasn't that bad. I just never got around to reading it until now. And I liked it! nice repitition. I like repitition today. :D

kk. I'll see if I can help. :wink: :D Have you ever seen a person die? Been there as they made their last breaths, as the so-called light faded from ...

Overall, I liked it. it was a good poem. nice job. And you cut yourself to feel alive. Wow. Very strong begining. Made me think, caught my attention, and had ...