Misty

P.S. Last thing--you say a girl "about Jack's age" but never mention how old Jack is. Just a thought. ^_^

Heyyy there, haven't seen you around XD I see you're kind of new? Interestingg...You've only posted 22 reviews of some 76 posts, that's no good...I would suggest reviewing two to ...

First off--it's pretty. Everyday they wake up and look in the mirror. I bet they wish that they could disappear. Actually, I don't. Thankyouverymuch. A torture device that bends the ...

nonononononononono... *politely disagrees with polkadots* Don't change the end, the gloomy suddenness is what gives it all it's twang. although i do agree with polkadots about the mothers' reaction in

The reason why this came so naturally to me was because every last Wednesday in August, there is a festival in Bunol where people run around half-naked throwing millions of ...

I always ramble on about not being the sort to critique poetry, but I'm going to try. Excuse it if it's sloppy, I'm new at this. ^_^ And welcome to ...

GENERAL WHATSITS Eeeighhh, I've been posting this to all the Fantasy writers that I've been reviewing--I'm not a Fantasy person, at all. In fact, most people in the world aren't. ...

*hums* I don't like your revisions. It shouldn't be half-naked, it should still be naked. And after "IT'S NOT TOMAHTO," you don't need the parenthesis bit. This is satire, the ...

Thanks Amelia. the thingaling cut off the end of the chapter *shrugs* it actually goes on for a couple more pages. ^_^ Thanks for rambling over!

Hey Azila! You're a lot of fun. Good story, I liked it. Onto the critique. ^_^ GENERAL OVERVIEW I'm impressed with this story. To tell you the truth, I absolutely ...

Hey Azila--first off, you are practically my favorite. You're a little prodigy in the making. And also a genius critiquer. Thank you for your suggestions--you are very good at pointing ...

Hey, I have to agree with Sam about gender issues. This is without a doubt, a guy story. And to be honest, I don't really care about his actions, I ...

XD how bout feigning sleep for a title?

I wrote this the other night while waiting for sleep... how weird is that? o.O Not so weird. I always write late at night. It's the only way. I lie ...

Dirty dirty, not a nothing. Excellent lines. This was a satisfying read--I never critique poems, but I will tell you that I liked this. It was very vivid, especially after ...