Misty

oh...wow. K, definately not my kind of poem...since I'm probably just like your friend (without thes stuck-uppy-ness) But I did like the ending of it though. "Well, I'll call you ...

that was for J Wilder I didn't see ur post when I wrote that but thanks. I'm trying to slow it down thanks for the crit!

This was really good. At first I was unsure but it wasn't too long or too short for a prologue. I was very interested with the intent of the rider, ...

First thing- I'm a coastal native american, Shoalwater Bay. Our reservation is on the coast of Washington State. So you know I was totally feeling this poem from the first ...

uh...he doesn't like or trust the boys in his dorm, because they ask him all sorts of personal questions (that's in the revision) but he does end up asking them. ...

the black eyed peas-monkey business. forgot the song title

I like this. It's really interesting and it gives you a strong picture...I like the metaphor of glassy tears. the bell just rang I'll crit this as soon as I ...

Haha lol. The superman thing is funny...but the one I can barely believe (although I do, I've heard it before) is the "rule of thumb." That is complete b******t. And ...

No that's not what I meant. It's a GOOD poem, it's just not my style. *Revivies poem* There. I brought it back.

Hmm...I didn't really like this, so BANG BANG BANG. Is that what you meant by "please kill it" (no you stupid idiot that's NOT what she meant. it was a ...

thanks!

Wow I really liked this! All of the real crit was taken above but for comments, I like the story line a lot, and I think you're developing your characters ...

I'm not sure what that means...but I don't think so. At least not in a bad way. And I thought the poll was kind of funny. :D Onto crit: :shock: ...

I really liked thse because I enjoyed seeing a different perspective on love. they were stunning, and the rhyming was pretty good too. You definately pulled it off. One thing: ...

He was, by this time, exhausted, but that did not stop a torrent of oncoming questions from the other guys in his dorm. They wanted to know who he was ...