Misty

meh...you actually managed to write a poem that I don't like. that in itself is a huge accomplishment, because I like almost everything and everyone... hmm...I guess it was just ...

*gasps* you have a gift. No, seriously. this is unreal

I didn't understand it until the very end, plus the end rhymed and the rest didn't, but I did like the ending---the rest was too confusing for me

thank ya. but I still don't feel like critting this now. L8er though, for sure. I'm happy I'm going to FLORIDA

he is, isn't he

Lol ur both funny. I liked the poem. I thought it was deep. And funny, in a sort of sarcastic way. Nice repitition.

Sometimes it’s hard just to look at you So if I smile quirkily, and I seem almost giddy it’s not the white-caramel cappuccino talking although that is what I’ll blame ...

er...I don't understand it. :lol: uh...what's it about?

meh. I'm not gonna finish your crit until you acknowledge me.

So...I am going to do something for you that I NEVER do. Intense crit. But only because we go back soooo far. lol. Welcome anyway (I don't know why ohhewwo ...

I like it and I hope you keep on writing

Okay...then the media basically tarnished his entire career. Nice going. I don't even know what to think of this, I guess I'm glad he got let off but the question ...

you're right. I should write an outline. :D thanks for the idea. And no, it doesn't change viewpoints every chapter. It needs to be vague. Besides, this is nothing, if ...

OK...wow. This is absolutely stunning. You practically knocked me out of my seat with the first paragraph, and continued to blow me away throughout the whole story. was like...you see? ...

er...you sort of lost me, lol. But hey...sure...okay. :D like sams aid, random emotional rants are it all the time.