Misty

hmmm... 1. Star Wars (because Hayden Christensen is beautiful) 2. My sick, sick novel (FIND IT IN ACTION/ADVENTURE SECTION) 3. Volleyball, considering that I had seven hours of it at ...

I read the first two chapters (I'm too tired to do any more right now,) and just let me say, you kept me interested. In fact, if I didn't have ...

This was the most unkindest cut of all. Julius Cæsar. ACT III Scene 2. I like how you start it off with a quote from something so all-encompassing. Bah---have read ...

I didn't crit this? I was sure I had! I printed it off and put it in my binder for god's sake! Obviously I lloved it. I just came back ...

You're absolutely welcome. But while I am intrigued and curious, and while my first crit is always free, the second is not. (What I mean by this is PLEASE PLEASE ...

nah. I know enough about grammar and creative writing-I specialize in both. But I urge you to continue-and I would definately pick it up off the shelf and leaf through ...

please do. And look over my story--in action/adventure. But it is a lil gross though, just warning

Ok, here's an idea: We can advertise our stories/poems/etc. here, so that people know they're here and get interested. (Besides, I'm sick of plugging people's pm's, much easier to just ...

“Why, exactly, do we have to stop at Safeway?” Bryant asked, annoyed. They had just finished seeing a movie at the mall, and now Natasha was insisting that they make ...

Wow. Intriguing. I caught a couple of grammatical errors towards the top, but for the most part this drew me in from the second sentence on. If you reread a ...

*snickers at Sam* lol (I mean, LAUGH OUT LOUD) Sam you are so awesome. I GOTTA read your story. (Why haven't I read it? I read the 228 Difference. But ...

part two of chapter one Natasha threw her purse on the overstuffed gray couch and flopped down gracelessly, brushing a long strand of hair out of her face. With a ...

OH MY GOSH I CAN'T BELIEVE HOW STUPID I AM!!!!!!! I just posted a thread on RK that asked if I was allowed to post my stuff about pedifile and ...

Prologue: Bryant. His parents named him that because to speak his name your lips would for a full circle. He had his father’s blue eyes, his mother’s ebony hair and ...

hmmm....I guess I'm hard to impress today. The last line was sheer brilliance...the rest...well, I don't know, it confused me, but I still liked it to an extent.