Misty

lol. Okay, this is Luke, right? Not Jeremy? Fabulous description on the kissing. Why the hell do guys like to use so much tongue? I'm sure I don't know, a ...

:P SAMMY! you've done it clue what's going on or why he can't see the girl (and of course there are a few typos from typing w/ your eyes closed) ...

I loved it i did i did! it was really powerful, and I am SUPER curious. I bet since him and Jeremy are twins, they mistook him for Jeremy. Yup, ...

*I can't believe I'm giving you a deep crit. I NEVER do this. You owe me, dude* Down the streets of Ravenswill, walked Akaira. *I WOULD SAY, "AKAIRA WALKED DOWN ...

" The doll was the only one that witnessed, All the flowing of the crimson pain, She could not close her fixed eyes, " omg i love this stanza. The ...

hey...I am absolutely AWFUL at critiques, due to lack of experience, really, but I'll try: you gave me nightmares about those emerald eyes: [that's pretty much adorable] submerged in saturday-night ...

I found this to be rather amusing. :P (in a sick morbid sense, so perhaps morality is dying...)

Ah. I am going to feel useless after everyone just gave you deep crits. But they took all the crit up what can I say? Hmm...some people were just slightly ...

the light breeze threw us around like a bleeding fist. a perfect example of forced rhyming. Which this whole poem was. Not to metion the flow was completely ruined at ...

Okay...I'm trying to get back into the site, so I'm reading and critiquing. But I do hope that if I help you with your stuff, you will return the favor ...

Hah. I'll critique your poem. Although I can't pretend to be an expert like these other ones. Fuck you, television watcher Isolation, the-world-doesn't-touch-you-liar. Artificial adult, hugging Americ

heheh. Interesting essay.

I have green eyes and I look hot in eyeliner...jk, jk.

I love labels too. It makes life more...fun. But I went to a tiny school of 100 kids where there weren't really labels. So now I'm more out in the ...

Actually, it's rated XXX because I was in a comical mood at the time...and it thoroughly amused me.