Misty

:P I'm still waiting for more :D

Green Day is the awesomest band in the existance of the universe!!!!! SO UH! lol, j/k punk/rock. All else is BLASPHEMY!!!!

:P yes they are.

*awwww...* you guys are sweet. :)

HAHA! I KNEW IT! Considering that Jeremy is always breaking windows and doing "dirty things in dark alleyways" as i believe you phrased it. ...actually your wording was diferent but ...

yes, it was your true story. Lol-remember the original draft! haha :D

*narrows eyes* I liked it too! ...actually he's right, for-or despite- such a lack of description it's quite easy to visualize. At least I have it all pictured out. The ...

:P p.s. R-heehee What blasphemy is this- that rattles the earth's core the dogs howl, and cats meow as buildings shake and roar Who had the bright idea to make ...

I had rather figured that out by myself. At least I knew it was to a painter of sorts. Anyway I felt compelled to figure out WHY I don't like ...

thanks to everyone who critted this. :P

I liked the last stanza, but that was about it. I never understand your poetry anymore...I used to fanatically love it. But your style and writing has changed a lot, ...

I didn't like it. I didn't get it. I found it to be repetitive and boring. The title was good though.

hmm. I found this to be rather poetic also. It made absolutely no sense, however. I guess that was what you were going for. "All the way home I kept ...

hmmm...I liked the beginning but after that it sort of was just like...rambling on. Though at first it captured my attention, I got bored of it really fast. :P maybe ...

AHHH! *mutters* pic looks much better sideways ah well