Misty

I can't as I'm an outcast...I have an intimate circle of friends, within a group of two circles of intimate friends in my class. Neither group is considered "outcast" although ...

hi sam...erm...this is...different. I can't say as it's my favorite thing you've ever written, but I have confidence that it will grow steadily better. And yeah...new title definately in order.

LOL! I am a DITZ. I thought this thing said, "Veritaserum, veritaserum, and meat eating," and I was thinking, "What does meat eating have to do with Harry Potter?" Erm...I ...

I started four days late, and, being the fifth, I have only 2,670 words. Pathetic. I don't even know what to write about. Good advice, btw, Eleore, I will do ...

Gosh I don't know. He doesn't have enough females. And yet, for generations, dating way back, people have been afraid of books. They ban Harry Potter novels in some schools. ...

meh. I found a subject-psychological disorders. The problem is, while researching, I found that I show signs of having an unusual amount of psychological disorders. Particularly Historial Personality

I don't like the options either, I loved Harry w. ginny while it lasted. The movie'll be AMAZING i'm sure

meh. As per sam's suggestion, I'm doing it. I need something to challenge me, otherwise i'll never write, I'll just sit around on MSN or watching TV...lol

I liked it, it was very good. The first three stanzas=excellent. Beautiful metaphors. However-why did you start rhyming this at the last stanza? It's important to be consistant in your ...

Okay-I have decided to cut out chapter one completely. This is the next chapter (newly chapter one..) Chapter One: Concerning the Introduction of our first two Pragmatists, and their initial ...

haha, sweetie this would probably go in a poetry section, rather than a writing section, but it's all good. Welcome to the site-the poem is interesting, I didn't love it ...

P.S. Fill in sections tend to be crap. It's the stuff the reader doesn't usually want to read. Try to exnay all of your fill-in sections, and replace them w/ ...

ah, i missed that. :O

:P that was something...I'm not in love with it, particularly the first paragraph. I don't like how his problem w/ room and board is immediately solved. :P people shouldn't have ...

how very odd. :P I rather like it. :D. She's craaaazy, isn't she? You put her thought process down very well, the reader is really drawn in, and I enjoyed ...