Misty

no she was explaining the mask as being "she" or w/e. You rushed this like hell. Try again. And don't do that cliched "rain matching mood" thing cuz trust me, ...

I liked it. It's very relatable. I'm glad guys actually have emotions. I must have missed that, apparently.

the last two lines were completely sweet. The rest was so-so...

wow. Would it be safe to say that you seem to have a form of dissociative identity disorder? no really this was really good. It make zero sense to me...maybe ...

i liked it i liked it i liked it!!! YAY it was good, seriously

I’m living the moment, The moment is now. (I actually liked that part a lot) I loudly applaud, as you take a bow. You’re a marvelous actor, You’re great at ...

i liked was very descriptive. :P

awwwww...I'm sorry! *hugs you* I bet you deserved first prize...*feels bad for you*

lol... "Your school allows kids to wear trench coats? As a technical detail, I'd probably change that." ...yup...I've never been to a school that didn't allow it anyway...but I'll change ...

okaaaaaaaay...sorry I shouldn't have posted at all I don't have any other comment but that.

so...why was it rated?

I just wanted you to know I had this story stuck in my head so I searched for it on YWS for forty five minutes before i finally found it...I ...

I think this would be a good background for the two kids-aka you move it up a good ten years and they're still sort-of-but-not-really friends, maybe she's super popular and ...

snoink: okaaaaaaaaaaay...sweet that you want to stand up for sam but...irrelevant. I know how amazing sam is, I'm just saying it didn't interest me much. my opinion.

i'll rant with you, I've been around awhile...I just prefer to browse and look at things rather than comment. :P