Misty

hey ari I thought this was excellent, you're a great writer. The last line was great, but the whole scene was great, and I liked the whole "military efficency" bit. ...

“Click” the lock sounds, and I breathe a sigh of relief. What if he’s serious? What if he’s not lying? “Stop it Nicky, he was just messing with you,” admonishing ...

hhahaah. I think we all read georgia. :P

Get off the damn computer and actually go exercise. Not only is it more healthy, but it makes you that much closer to your goal being 'good-looking'. Hey Blue, for ...

2 Beck woke up with a crick in her neck, and rubbed it as she stumbled to the mirror. Oh, wonderful, she thought. There is a zit on my nose. ...

I am, as they say, about as subtle as a flying brick. And people who wear their hearts as the main accessory tend to get them broken more easily. So ...

ho hum. I tried to do an actual crit and I just got, well, you know "nice, great, cool," and so on so forget that. There were a couple of ...

lol sam you know I love this. It sounds vaguely familiar, gee I wonder why....:D It's really well written I especially like that bit at the end w. the gingham ...

it was a bit smallish and hard to see but it was still really cool and it must've been fun to make!

Poor Imp got the errors. The concept for the story was good, if you could go on with this it'd be nice but you need to work on your grammar ...

It seems too unreal to believe...I don't want to believe it. I keep pushing it towards the back of my mind, hoping it will all go away. It keeps surfacing ...

LOL---there are fifteen more pages and I'd be happy to post them. :P I just didn't want to put too much up the first time. Thanks so much for the ...

hey---I love Relienk K too, been a fan since I was eleven. Saw them in concert last summer, in fact... Anyway---This is NOT bad, but the spelling is AWFUL, so ...

Roping Dolls Prologue: Stacy Heath was a doll. At least, that’s what Johnny Jay called her. Wavy, Barbie-blonde hair, pinkish lips, volumptious body, she had it all. But dolls ain’t ...

lol. this made me laugh. Kudos for the first good lotr spoof I've seen