Misty

oi...that sounds great

WHY!!!!!????

You slipped into first person the last few sentences, which is annoying. Other than that...decent

okeydokey, I voted for the boring, no offense intended. However, it does have excellent potential, with a little bit of work. The clouds darkened strangely and Strick now saw a ...

George decided to perm his hair the night before the wedding. It was getting long and shaggy, quite like it had been in his younger, surfing days. His bride-to-be would ...

Wow. wowowowowowowowowowow. Wow. And thrice wow. I thought the ending was brilliant. I thought the whole thing was brilliant. My initial reaction is probably unsuitable for this thread as it ...

Not a little confusing, a lot confusing. It made no sense whatsoever. The reader is given the vague idea that the girl said something mean about her brother and he's ...

wowsers, I'll definitely remember to do that.:P

Ahhh...I really loved it. It's written from a bit of a fatalistic attitude, but that works for this. I've never read a autobiographical piece that I really liked, but this ...

ppppffffffffft. that's freaking hilarious.

The first stanza is especially good, particularly the last four lines. The second stanza is excellent, the third is decent. But the ending is a little weak, it seems like ...

Crysi---LOL! I love redheads, I've always wanted to be one I just don't think I could pull it off. Anyway I probably should have put this in randomness. And you're ...

Wow. Talk about adorable. I'll hae to write that one down so next time I go shopping...yeah...TBR....MMHMM.....nice. :P BR

This is actually for a survey I've been working on since...forever. So what are you wearing? Me? AE jeans Green Day Kerplunk t-shirt white blazer red converse

Very run-on. The end--very abrupt. The paragraphs--not good. Everytime someone different speaks, you need to change paragraphs. The storyline is decent, though.