Misty

okeydokey, here goes. :P Perched on top of a gargoyle, I feel a warm wind. Coming with the warmth was the smell of burning timber, gas and plastics. House fire, ...

Okay Jiggy, you won the Misty Lottery. So I'm gonna give you one of my famous, 2 hour critiques. Enjoy! (BTW: prepare for harshness!) There is a place. In this ...

haha...I think I read something of yours. A poem, perhaps? Idk...I'll have to go check it out now. As far as your writing strategies go...Brilliant! I would do that too, ...

oh, okay. Didn't catch that. That clears it up a bit. No problem, what am I here for? if you ever have anything you want me to crit, just PM ...

heeheehee.... There are no words....simply none... *tear*

*laughs* Uh...I think uh, that this was just a joke right? and she OMG. she cryed she wuz so happy becaue now zhe ouckd final be poular.. and sol lille ...

Hey, don't be a jerk. And if you're not going to critique it, don't comment.

Remy By: Misty Lynn Ellingburg (2/13/06) 1 I first met Remy at the Tinseltown movie theatre in upstate New York. I had been OTR for two weeks, long since run ...

Oi Vey. It does need some work. But it's promising. And yeah, I can be a harsh critiquer. But I like you're story, so I'm going to help you with ...

Ergh, I really didn't like this at all. The last bit in parentheses (can you hear me my dear) and after was good. but the rhyming was too much. You ...

Okay, on the whole this was good. But there were a few things: Eying the blinding glisten of her left earring, I indefatigably loathed her. hehe...indefatigably, is it? I think ...

The last two stanzas were excellent, as were some of the first. However, the first stanzas don't even suggest that it was rape. and I don't like the rhyme "mare."

Actually, I thought it was kind of...dull. The paragraphs were long and I found myself skipping over whole bits to get to the end. I was curiously waiitng for the ...

Uh, this is quite short. It's the second short story I've tried to write. I wrote another that was less cliche, so I'll be posting that soon, too. Hopefully this ...

erm...okay Michael says: then what do u want "I'll hold him, you can beat him." says: you to care "I'll hold him, you can beat him." says: and really care, ...