Misty

hahaha ok I forgive you

I didn't know if this merited a PG-13 or an R, but R seemed too harsh so... JACK IN THE BOX July 19th, 2006 1 New York City, New York ...

I usually kill of a subsidiary character in the story to achieve a certain amount of character development in my MC. To change them, or something like that. But yeah...killing ...

ERgh I know how that is...you're in some strange spur-of-the-moment and that's all it takes to come up with this awful corny scene. With any luck though, you haven't shown ...

ooh, fun fun. You will have to PM me when you post this. How awful would that be to have all that POOF, GONE? Well the thing with writing for ...

er.... Good question. Watch Gangster movies--slitting throats don't seem too hard, you just have to grab them from behind and slut it. As far as the chest far as Gangs ...

A very good little story. Not particularly poetic in the imagery, but symbollic. to show the pale pink face of hunger. But I don’t flinch, I simply wonder if anyone ...

wellll what this was was basically you just trying to express an idea in your head. Not exactly poetic, but I liked the last stanza.

I PMed you on this.

Ahhh, good. I had no idea. It's always good to rewrite things, it hones your skills and expands your writing portfoliom, etc.etc.

Quote: It’s like you just sat down and said, “Well I am going to make Anna, a random, brooding girl, and she will be the Emo One. Then I will ...

It would seem as though I am guilty of one of the cliches *cough,jetblackhair,cough* hehehehe...

awwww smaur doesn't like my tips!! MWAHAHAHAHAHA you read my post! heeheehee

Background Characters, and How they Can Seriously Screw You Over A crap background character isn’t any good for anyone. It’s like a tiny gray blurb that no one will remember. ...

Ah, seems as though you've given me all of these tips--while reading my stories. :P But they are so true, and so helpful, and it causes me to wonder: "She's ...