Misty

PERFECTOMUNDO, is all I can say. I guess. :P I do miss Featured Story, though.

*laughs* You're welcome. But I am terminally ill in the brains department, remember that, so my word should not be taken without second opinion.

I actually liked it. It's hard to critique poems, but it had a nice flow. I especially liked the like "let the scissors do the talking."

last thing:: I thought on the whole the story was good, very original. A little bit...questionable, at parts (just ignore my GAh, NONONOing, I told you I am dramatic), but ...

It is a nice short story, and now that MH has done EVERYTHING, my review seems almost unnecessary. But I'll post it in any case. Hard on it? Oh magic, ...

Who does need friends, really? Lol--I prefer #2 pencils myself though. As always, if you have any questions or comments PM me.:) THINGS YOU DID WELL “What are you doing ...

Need help, eh? Good! That’s what we’re here for! Okay, Sam has been (desperately) trying to teach me to critique, so I'll try this new method of hers... THINGS YOU ...

As I have already given you my most thorough critiques of this (i.e. This is great! Keep it up! no, only joking), I should just like to say that I ...

thank you xanthum, for your meaningful and helpful critique. :P

Ah...brilliant. The ending sort of tied it all together,didn't it? I would love to comment profusely and make this deep and meaningful but there is a cassorole waiting for me ...

*laughs* it WAS on RealKids...remember Mallory?

*laughs* I wish I could help you, lol. I have never had more than a soda myself. But I've seen my friends insanity, and I think it's fair to assume ...

:P Good point Snoink.,..and everyone else. :P

Toki,” he said trying it out. “Why’d you look away, Toki? I loved looking at your eyes. They’re a very pretty blue.” CHEESY ALERT. BAd enough that you're over-clicheying Hunky, ...

Oh! there are too many good things in this to even single out. The "razor thin lips" and symbolism in the water, and the callous conversations about screwing guys ten ...