Misty

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The trouble with songs is that they're so hard to review, because a song can have the suckiest lyrics but have a rock-awesome tune and great accompaniment and it makes ...

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

*laughs* Haha. I was totally feeling "white girl eminem" in this, without the vulgarities and wifebeaters and whatnot. I was saying it in my head and rocking out to the ...

Wow. get off my fucking couch You really started off this poem strong, and it stayed strong throughout. The use of profanity when, at times can seem to strong, was ...

Ahhh...I liked this. I haven't got much to say by way of critique, except that, the rhythm was constantly off (read through it slowly) and at first you had a ...

I don’t need therapy, I need to therapy myself. Question: what is the world’s obsession with labels? Why is it that we feel we need to label ourselves and others ...

Hehe. My parents left for the weekend, leaving me with the internet all to my little old selfy. I'll be here the whoooole time. YESSSSS!!!! It'll be practically worth the ...

LOL. Yes. That would work. :P Good luck!

Hmm...perhaps I will try NaNoWriMo, when November comes. Its kind of scary I must admit. That's a lot of words. I'll be thinking about a plot now, to prepare myself ...

THINGS YOU DID WELL In a way, Regan wasn’t lost at all. EXCELLENT way to start off the story! PERFECTOMUNDO, even. Very professional. Very enthralling. Draws me in quickly. V. ...

Actually, I liked this. But that's just because I'm a huge Georgia Nicholson fan. Obsessive, you might say...HOWEVER, and ON THE OTHER FOOT... THINGS THAT COULD USE A SECOND LOOK ...

It was predestined, a fairy tale gone faulty. Ahh...your words are so good. It's practically poetic. "Dazzling delinquent" an "mysterious mystic." It's lovely. "hasty hands," added to the mix, and ...

No. The body would be taken. Immediately. By paramedics. No right-thinking doctor would leave a dead body in a room. It's too dangerous and it's just not right. Unless they ...

Awwww, brad is so sweeeet. :P that wasn't helpful. I should say something helpful. Let me think...AH YES! I've discovered your rhyme scheme in the first stanza! Excellent!