Misty

I should not have jumped in at the middle, because this just confused the hell out of me. But I did read the beginning of #29 which seemed to be ...

This was a good short story. I was interested, and I didn't expect that surprise ending. I agree with everything Ofour said, and I guess I'm being lazy and not ...

I'm proud of you. Seriously. Proud. This is what I mean when I tell people not to slap their reader in the face with God. This was not only eloquently ...

I'm not so into this sort of writing myself, and I've never met anyone in real life with that kind of confidence. I can't really critique it, but I do ...

That book was fantastic. Read it w/ the whole series in 10th grade.

*thank you to all the people who responded to the invasive messages in their inboxes...:) This part is essentially character development. Tell me if there's too much dialogue...the formatting in ...

THIS IS WHAT I CALL IMPORANT, SO LISTEN UP Stephen King said something very important in an 'everything you need to know about writing in ten minutes' arcticle. You ought ...

I enjoyed this. It wasn't half so wordy as your usual style, but I found it perfectly acceptable, *far* from nauseating. One of my favorite things you've written in awhile. ...

Fantastic. Thank you. *shifty eyed* Although, I hope nobody has a problem with plugging people for critiques...if you ask someone nicely via PM, they will quite often critique it for ...

Goodbye! I will miss you, Jordan, and I'm sorry you have to leave. Maybe I will stealthily show up in L.A. and you can "minister" to me. Oh dear. I ...

You're welcome. :P No self-respecting english teacher woudl ask someone to write a "story reflection." *scoffs*

Hmmmph...sounds a bit like Man on Fire, a bit like The Godfather, but with a LOT of dialogue and not much character development to show for it.

I liked the story but you do need a new title, it was an interesting take on hallucinogens but the explanation at the end was most definitely unnecessary. :P You ...

Avast! I copy/pasted this so I will get to it tonight. :)

I just used the words that came naturally, I hadn't intended to take any of them out, except the hyperglycemic, which was obvious...I'll find a good substitute word eventually.