Misty

God, I adored it. Not only is this the best thing you've written, but it's the best thing I've ever read on YWS. Of course, you've improved since the last ...

Ok, so there are clearly a few things at play here. 1) an old man likes to watch TV, 2) he is obsessive compulsive, and 3) there is a thunder ...

Oh, and I adore your quote.

Sadly, in fact, it was interesting enough to keep reading. It was like a sick horror movie. There are ways to show without telling. The repitition of God this, God ...

*Is confused* How many people did I shang'hai anyway? Gosh. I got busy. Teehee..

THE SHOES I was manufactured in a factory on 7/7/1982, and shipped overseas. I was ugly from the get-go. I knew that because I didn’t sell, and ended up on ...

Alas, it failed to amuse me, and I didn't much care for the old bard style, anyway. You might try your luck in the lyrics section, in any case. I ...

Teehee. Heeheehee. Even the first chapter title is hilarious-o. :) Niice.

Pepsi!

Wow. I really enjoyed this. It was very powerful, for a short story. I'm really impressed. Wish I could say something helpful here, but I guess just keep doing what ...

Hey there! Writing about things we know is always fun, and you seem to have taken a lot of dance lessons yourself! It's good to write about what makes you ...

Hey~ I second Meep in; if it's really bad, why should you post it? And why should I read it? However, I DID read it, despite your trying to convince ...

Meh, I title things from the first moment of conception of an idea. All American Kid, Glass Girl, Mack, whocares...The most recent is The Postman Comes Looking For Us. Does ...

SAMANTHA I hold Jimmy around the shoulders and halfway drag him out from under the bridge, shaking. The man who drove us out is enormous and awe-inspiring. He’s wearing an ...

Thanks Myth, and Meggs: I do have a point for this, and it's not forced weirdness~as to why I wrote it, I guess, you'd just have to read the rest.