Misty

Hey, First off--good story. It's like the resurrection of the decent short story. The characters were really believable, the scenery was interesting, descriptions, beautiful. It's funny how this feels

*smiles* Ari, you're cute. You have a Princess infatuation. It's adorable. There's not a lot I can say about this piece. Your writing is crisp and sound, your characters fairly ...

XD You would be my bestest internet pally.

i don't believe that is an actual link, but actually, just a copy.paste. but knock yourself out man. :)

Chapter One The Gift of Gab Michael Jennings has four bars of soap stacked up on his coral colored bathroom countertop. They are in white wrappings. They are Jergens brand. ...

crap. loogadat. Myspace html doesn't transfer to yws html. oh well. cheers and good luck! if you do a second draft let me know.

Hi there. K, I was reading through this the other day when it was on the home page and it caught my interest. SO. Let me make a shifty attempt ...

I have to hand it to you, this is good. It was a slowly packed punch. It was like a poem. I really love it. :P I'm sorry I'm not ...

I am a very proud muse. It's like I told you yesterday, you start a story with eloquence, build emotion throughout, and then end with such a punch that it ...

She is going to start sending my manuscript to pengiun, harpercollins, random house, candlewick, and so on, within a couple weeks. This is the real deal. I'm a writer now. ...

I sent my story into the Sandra Dijkstra agency (who tie LA times pronounced "one of the top 5 agents on the west coast) and they read the entire 60 ...

Aha! I feel genius. In a lame sort of way, because even as I started reading it, I knew who is was about and what it would be about and ...

I won first place for the story, The Postman Comes Looking for Us and I'm meeting editors from random house and harper collins and so on in August. !!

'ello, sambo. I know I promised to do this absolutely ages ago...but erm...I forgot. Heh. Chocolate Cheesecake: INGREDIENTS 1 1/2 cups chocolate cookie crumbs 2 tablespoons white sugar 1/4 cup ...

mhhhmmmmm...I did enjoy. rather a lot. Like a big piece of zero calorie cake! hoorah! However, on pieces like this, on poetry, and on emotion, one can hardly presume to ...